It’s somewhat of a common convention that if the text directly indicates something for the player to do, the exact phrasing in the text should work. I’m heavily cued to “thank the archer”, but I cannot type THANK ARCHER or TALK TO ARCHER, so without guessing the verb you want, I’m stuck. I pushed the wolf off me twice, and it was shot by an Archer. This is quite important in a text adventure that requires navigation by compass direction and would completely lose a player not familiar with IF parser conventions. I figured out how to get into and around the forest, but your descriptions are lacking compass directions indicating where the player can go. It’s a good thing that you have your work boots on, or else you might slip over! The trees surrounding the path let the full moon’s light shine through their canopies. "The main pathway through Wolf Forest is a dirt path that is half natural, half man-made and mixed with stones and sticks all around. The first two sentences are fragments and the third is a run-on sentence. There are several problems in this section. Mixed with stones and sticks all around you, it’s a good job that you have your work boots on, or else you might slip over! The trees surrounded around you are letting the full moon’s light shine through their canopies down below, it is a real nice sight.” A dirt path that is half natural, half man-made. “You are a 17 year old male, who owns the local farm.” (don’t need the comma) I appreciate the soundtrack, having done a game or two with sound myself. Try contacting the owner of the form if you think this is a mistake. This form can only be viewed by users in the owner’s organization. I was not able to reach your feedback form:
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